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When I Saw You

spiraling spinning weaving around
up and down without sound
moving one way, being pulled too
something's attracting me to you

Venus incarnate, Aphrodite reborn
Inanna transcending, Aurora at dawn
with just a glance and a warm smile
I've been uplifted mile after mile

minute by minute, hour to hour
I have been touched by a great power
something has lingered, something remains
I feel released from invisible chains

I feel I'm floating. I feel I'm one
with the Earth, one with the Sun
I feel I'm more than ever I've been
I feel invisible moving unseen

spiraling spinning weaving around
up and down without sound
moving and moving, being pulled too
by something I felt when I saw you
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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