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Fragile
Fragile are we
surrounded by the undrinkable sea
astounded by all possibility
grounded on a world so watery .
Canyons appear under water
mother nature we fear
and mass slaughter
a future unclear
each other we torture
but every second is always near
bringing a son or a daughter .
Fragile humans yet to be overthrown
diseases that get blown
illnesses unknown .
Fragile are we
as each day turns
agile toxicity
in a world of solar burns .[/font]
surrounded by the undrinkable sea
astounded by all possibility
grounded on a world so watery .
Canyons appear under water
mother nature we fear
and mass slaughter
a future unclear
each other we torture
but every second is always near
bringing a son or a daughter .
Fragile humans yet to be overthrown
diseases that get blown
illnesses unknown .
Fragile are we
as each day turns
agile toxicity
in a world of solar burns .[/font]
Published 12th Feb 2010
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2010 11:17pm
poem. Short and stark and devoid of any flowery excess. The occasional rhyme added a pleasent musicality to the piece, and there were a couple of very good phrases, such as 'canyons appear under water'. That was one hell of an image.
29th Jan 2011 1:49am
I enjoyed the way some of this seemed almost written backwards. Very refreshing poem that suited my early hours mood. Thanks for that.
31st Jan 2011 4:33am
