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Lust
Baited Echoes
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Baited Echoes
Written by
Everavalon
Published
16th Jun 2023
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Visual Poetry #temptation
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for the visual poem #temptations competition
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#lust
#temptation
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Re. Baited Echoes
Betty
16th Jun 2023 4:46pm
I’m crazy about the title, and the easy cascade of whispery-shivery thoughts. Like a breath from a lover on the back of the neck
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Everavalon
17th Jun 2023 1:43pm
Thank you Betty.
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Re. Baited Echoes
BITS
(Butterfly in the Storm)
19th Jun 2023 9:02am
Hi Ev,
Strange to read you covering this theme. It read well, fair play.
Regards,
BITS
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