Relinquishing Presence

I really enjoyed this.  It carries a rhyme scheme and a theme in direction, with a metaphorical focus on an ironic disposition of fate.  "Revenge" is a good word to look at in many ways.  You can really pack a punch with it, and you did.  You seemed to get your point across, like I said, in a sort of ironic way of embracing the fact that everyone dies, just or unjust.  The narrative seems to get "what is due" at the end.  You also alluded to emotions and thoughts throughout the work that really build to and climax in a culmination of the theatrical conclusion.  Very concise.  You always seem be concrete and compacted in how you use your words.  Anyway, thanks for sharing.  I enjoyed the read.  Looking forward to hearing from you again soon!

Thank you for your comments, as always. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I haven’t been on for awhile so I have some catching up to do. I always appreciate you stopping by.