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It still hurts
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It still hurts
I gave you 10 years 3 kids
And this is what you did?!
you got a new chick
Who you call your boo
I wonder if you're going to beat on her too?
Your homeboys are laughing behind your back, calling you wack and giving you no slack
You say this chick is the love of your life and she's going to be your wife
I'm happy for you hopefully you don't leave hear black & blue
She don't have a clue what she's getting into
Its only been 3 months not enough time for her to get out of line
I wish her luck, shit really I don't give a Fuck!
It still hurts
I gave you 10 years 3 kids
And this is what you did?!
you got a new chick
Who you call your boo
I wonder if you're going to beat on her too?
Your homeboys are laughing behind your back, calling you wack and giving you no slack
You say this chick is the love of your life and she's going to be your wife
I'm happy for you hopefully you don't leave hear black & blue
She don't have a clue what she's getting into
Its only been 3 months not enough time for her to get out of line
I wish her luck, shit really I don't give a Fuck!
Published 16th Apr 2012
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2012 12:47pm
Very effective poem....
It is very hard to tell a woman who desires a man that he is wife-beater and a horrible excuse for a human being......These men can put on the charm....
Good work
It is very hard to tell a woman who desires a man that he is wife-beater and a horrible excuse for a human being......These men can put on the charm....
Good work
16th Apr 2012 2:12pm
Yea he's a poor excuse for a husband and a father. At the beginning he makes you feel like a queen and then his true colors show. Thanks for reading and commenting
I can feel you emotional pain in this. Good for you for having the courage to walk a way before its too late. :)
16th Apr 2012 2:17pm
16th Apr 2012 3:33pm
good thing your gone b4 sumthing tragic happened.In my situation i left to late and my daughter paid the price of my mistakes ..but all in all very good poem..:)
16th Apr 2012 3:39pm
I'm so sorry to here that :-( that's why I left the emotional and physical abuse start happening to my kids I had to go its been 8½ months and its hard but we're truly much happier. Thank you for reading and commenting
16th Apr 2012 4:11pm
.......definitely sounds like the right choice was made. I keep going back to learning tree and from there certain quips are pulled back into my remembrance as we men learn the same lessons that you learn. I'm constantly reminded that "it takes a fool to learn that *love* don't love nobody". Make sure that first you love yourself and then let that light shine down upon the choice you make of whom to love. I like ur poem.
16th Apr 2012 4:36pm
I was raised that the man is the king of the castle and as the wife you are to summit but I know now that the man has to deserve that power or control. I also now know that love doesn't love anyone but I wont give up on finding my king. I also love myself 1st :-)
17th Apr 2012 2:16am
17th Apr 2012 6:55am
Thank you bianca777 I try to be strong lol thanks for reading and commenting :-)
