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when you're around

when you're around
i notice, I can breathe
letting feelings flow
with the rush of a raven's song
descending past all that was wrong
before trauma built her wall
and i gave in to it all
pain in pursuit of an endless wave
to take it all away
to take me long away

you take me away
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