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Re. partner
1st Jun 2023 12:46pm
Sounds a romantic way to search for love. Sometimes a bright moon can be encouraging to venture out inl
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1st Jun 2023 1:58pm
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1st Jun 2023 9:22pm
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2nd Jun 2023 7:21am
Re. partner
1st Jun 2023 10:59pm
You can be my wolf in sheep's clothing. The moon also make the women beauty glisten in the moonlight. Keep on writing.
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2nd Jun 2023 7:22am
Re. partner
2nd Jun 2023 7:38am
Lovely writing :) Moves like a movie through the imagination. Thanks for sharing the moment.
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2nd Jun 2023 10:11am
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2023 12:46pm
hey dimpy!
your poems are concise but possess big meanings from behind!
its the proof that you dont have to use countless words to explain one you think/feel
you can write a short poem and make the reader feeel what you want to convey
your worrds smell like flowers
your poems are concise but possess big meanings from behind!
its the proof that you dont have to use countless words to explain one you think/feel
you can write a short poem and make the reader feeel what you want to convey
your worrds smell like flowers
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22nd Jun 2023 12:54pm
Re. partner
23rd Jun 2023 5:21am
I be your partner on this wonderful night where you glistening like the stars. Keep on writing my beautiful smart strong sexy woman.
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Re: Re. partner
23rd Jun 2023 5:54am