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Truth of Life
I'm gonna die
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I'm gonna die
I'm gonna die
unfulfilled and empty
never a part of the picture
only ever a smudge
on the fucking frame
Written by
Dreamboy
Published
31st May 2023
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I don't even want to fix it anymore
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#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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Re. I'm gonna die
deliabear
(Debbie)
31st May 2023 1:03pm
Been there.
Sending you a hug.
I like that you are brave enough to write that.
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Re: Re. I'm gonna die
Dreamboy
1st Jun 2023 00:41am
I've "been there" since I was a child. I don't want to be here or there anymore.
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Re. I'm gonna die
dimpy
(dimpsmoon)
31st May 2023 2:18pm
This Life is very beautiful n you will definitely live this beautiful life, you will never be a smudge. Keep patience n be happy ❤️
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Re: Re. I'm gonna die
Dreamboy
1st Jun 2023 00:40am
Can't make yourself happy.
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Re: Re. I'm gonna die
dimpy
(dimpsmoon)
1st Jun 2023 2:10am
Why? 🤔
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Re. I'm gonna die
robert43041
(Viking)
31st May 2023 2:26pm
A smudge...........until you decide to move.........Kisses, Robert.
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