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A Moment of Peace
I step out into this precarious world
with my ultraviolet soul.
Birds with beating wings
take off for enchanted unknowns.
The luscious leaves are swaying drunk
with breeze.
Magically puts my tormented thoughts at ease.
Leaves flap and bob possessing whispers
of nostalgia and inevitabilities.
The simple joy of the day holds
ineludible agonies at bay.
Allows stifled fragments of my mind
to soar the sky and fly away.
with my ultraviolet soul.
Birds with beating wings
take off for enchanted unknowns.
The luscious leaves are swaying drunk
with breeze.
Magically puts my tormented thoughts at ease.
Leaves flap and bob possessing whispers
of nostalgia and inevitabilities.
The simple joy of the day holds
ineludible agonies at bay.
Allows stifled fragments of my mind
to soar the sky and fly away.
Author's Note
Traded agony with peace for a day.
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Re. A Moment of Peace
30th May 2023 12:27pm
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30th May 2023 12:37pm
Re. A Moment of Peace
30th May 2023 1:23pm
This was lovely, sweet lady. I am a fan of the way you use slant rhyme and alliteration to execute, and I’m also into the way you wrap nature into your thoughts.
This was a soft inhale on a quiet morning.
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Re. A Moment of Peace
30th May 2023 2:30pm
Why thank you fine lady! 😊
I'm a poet, but I had to look up slant rhyme, lol
Nature is a part of my soul, it weaves in with my thoughts.
Thx for reading, I've missed u
I'm a poet, but I had to look up slant rhyme, lol
Nature is a part of my soul, it weaves in with my thoughts.
Thx for reading, I've missed u
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30th May 2023 2:36pm
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Re. A Moment of Peace
31st May 2023 2:04am
I can almost imagine the scenario. You did a great compare and contrast type of thing with some of this. The description of both you spirit, and nature seemingly meld together. The addition of direction in emotion, and transitioning theme makes for a pretty creative depth. Thanks for sharing!
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31st May 2023 2:51am
Wow thank u so much for those comments.
It's great to hear things I don't even realize about the poem.
I feel one with nature which is why it prob comes across that way.
Have a great night. 🌙 ⭐
It's great to hear things I don't even realize about the poem.
I feel one with nature which is why it prob comes across that way.
Have a great night. 🌙 ⭐
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31st May 2023 4:37am
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31st May 2023 12:17pm