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Swan

What I've noticed about swan,is that he does go on.      
     
On and on,and on,and on.      
I ask myself,when will he stop and get to the heart of the song?      
It's far to long,his carry on.      
     
I find swan to be quite a predictable bore.      
Strutting around. As if he's a cool Cob.  
When everyone knows,he's just a slob,    
that dishes out verses,that have been sung before,    
but not so long.      
     
Oh swan.      
Why can't you grace us with an original song?  
But then again,what writer of Swan songs does?     
This swan,that feels like it's a Cob,but acts  more like The Pen.  
Seriously confused at birth.  
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
© CandyFlossMonet. May 2023
Written by CanDyFloss_72Monet (Candy72_Monet)
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