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A Penny For Your Thoughts
An unearthing
A melting, sunset amber
Pink
Your lips
My touch
Words, like reason, lost
In the broad strokes of finality
Startled
A covey takes flight
Taut bursts - and gasps
Silken
You look at me, yet not
Riding the feelings flow
Gaze lost
You gather me in
All of me
Husky in the sultry eve
Your voice falters
Drowning in my demands
Wolves howling
Growling
To each our own
The scent of prey
Somewhere treetops golden
While 'neath the boughs
The shadows deepen
Somewhere
I breath the dark erotic of you
Not jasmine
Sweat mingled with musk
And the taste of your skin
Kissing as if searching for the stars unseen
Night comes, and so do I
- Not yet
Not yet -
You bite me on the lip
Riding the razor's edge
Til edges blur and are lost
In raw throbbing need
Black as night
A melting, sunset amber
Pink
Your lips
My touch
Words, like reason, lost
In the broad strokes of finality
Startled
A covey takes flight
Taut bursts - and gasps
Silken
You look at me, yet not
Riding the feelings flow
Gaze lost
You gather me in
All of me
Husky in the sultry eve
Your voice falters
Drowning in my demands
Wolves howling
Growling
To each our own
The scent of prey
Somewhere treetops golden
While 'neath the boughs
The shadows deepen
Somewhere
I breath the dark erotic of you
Not jasmine
Sweat mingled with musk
And the taste of your skin
Kissing as if searching for the stars unseen
Night comes, and so do I
- Not yet
Not yet -
You bite me on the lip
Riding the razor's edge
Til edges blur and are lost
In raw throbbing need
Black as night
Author's Note
Or we could just watch TV
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Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
23rd May 2023 1:25am
Dear AJ,
With inflation such as it is you should really consider charging at least 25c.
However, here’s my penny. This is beautiful and how about both? A little bit of this and that and then a bit of t.v.
I really loved the envelopment and joy of treasuring each other within the write. It reminds me there is this kind of relationship that can still be kindled and rekindled.
Wonderful write. H 🌷
With inflation such as it is you should really consider charging at least 25c.
However, here’s my penny. This is beautiful and how about both? A little bit of this and that and then a bit of t.v.
I really loved the envelopment and joy of treasuring each other within the write. It reminds me there is this kind of relationship that can still be kindled and rekindled.
Wonderful write. H 🌷
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
Hmm...so - are you trying to light my fire, or just tempting me to get to my TV? 🤔🙄 I'm hiding my remote! 😁😋🌼
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
23rd May 2023 1:43am
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
23rd May 2023 1:47am
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
23rd May 2023 1:49am
Harumph and I beg to disagree. I’m very rarely wrong.
(Big fib. I’m frequently wrong.)
(Big fib. I’m frequently wrong.)
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
23rd May 2023 2:10am
I b like, "Hey, Babe -H! I'm needing' some tempting' over here!"
N u b like, "Hold on, I'm watching Hallmark! This is the scene where the wrong guy proposes to her and she realizes she really loves the guy she dumped ten years ago who never got over her.." 😝😂😂😂
N u b like, "Hold on, I'm watching Hallmark! This is the scene where the wrong guy proposes to her and she realizes she really loves the guy she dumped ten years ago who never got over her.." 😝😂😂😂
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
23rd May 2023 7:15pm
Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
24th May 2023 10:28am
I became lost within the blackest night and the throbbing need therein but also completely and utterly head over heals about the comments above!! So funny and spot on...
What a deliciously palpable and steamy read that ended with me totally belly laughing.. and isn't that how it all should be!?!... If only.
Thanks to you for such an incredible read, J and for both you and Honoria for being so awesome, funny and insightful.... It's like the perfect icing on an already scrumptious cake!
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What a deliciously palpable and steamy read that ended with me totally belly laughing.. and isn't that how it all should be!?!... If only.
Thanks to you for such an incredible read, J and for both you and Honoria for being so awesome, funny and insightful.... It's like the perfect icing on an already scrumptious cake!
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
24th May 2023 9:29pm
Hmm...does this mean you'd put the tempting on hold for Hallmark too? 😕🙄
The only guys getting any tempting now days are on Hallmark...I'm losing hope in fhe fairer sex 😞🌼
The only guys getting any tempting now days are on Hallmark...I'm losing hope in fhe fairer sex 😞🌼
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
24th May 2023 10:13pm
I'm not a Hallmark channel kinda gal, myself(not that there's anything wrong with being one!) ...However, as much as I love movies, the thrill and allure of some well honed tempting will always win out, especially if it's as amazing as the above poem depicts...Ohhh my!! The cuddling during a good movie is the 'aftercare' if you will... Plus, I tend to like movies that most people think are too scary, too nerdy, odd or unusual, which definitely leaves me out of that mainstream feel-good Hallmark/Lifetime group of folks. Not that that's a bad thing only different and what I consider, wonderfully unique! ;)
I giggled again at your comments, J... thanks
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I giggled again at your comments, J... thanks
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
24th May 2023 10:23pm
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
24th May 2023 11:29pm
1. True Romance (written by Quentin Tarantino)
2. White Oleander (Michelle Phifer at her freaking best!)
3. It's a tie between the remake of Dawn of the Dead and the director's cut anniversary edition of The Exorcist.
lol... (I left out my love of Star Trek and Star Wars as to not 🤓 nerd out completely!)
-xo
2. White Oleander (Michelle Phifer at her freaking best!)
3. It's a tie between the remake of Dawn of the Dead and the director's cut anniversary edition of The Exorcist.
lol... (I left out my love of Star Trek and Star Wars as to not 🤓 nerd out completely!)
-xo
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
OK, except for Star Wars and Star Trek, I haven't seen those movies. I live under a rock out in the sticks. 🤔...fair is fair...way off the beaten path fare from me...
Adventure: Valhalla Rising with Mads Mikkelsen, & Master and Commander: The Far Side of the World with Russell Crowe
Romantic Comedy: Bennie and Joon & Don Juan DeMarco both with Johnny Depp
Westerns: The Wild Bunch with William Holden, & Jeremiah Johnson with Robert Redford
SYFI: Blade Runner: The Final Cut (1982) Rutger Hauer, & Dune Part One (2021) Timothée Chalamet
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Kenneth Branagh's adaption of Shakespeare's Henry V & The Edge of the World (1937) just because
Adventure: Valhalla Rising with Mads Mikkelsen, & Master and Commander: The Far Side of the World with Russell Crowe
Romantic Comedy: Bennie and Joon & Don Juan DeMarco both with Johnny Depp
Westerns: The Wild Bunch with William Holden, & Jeremiah Johnson with Robert Redford
SYFI: Blade Runner: The Final Cut (1982) Rutger Hauer, & Dune Part One (2021) Timothée Chalamet
🙈🙉🙊
Kenneth Branagh's adaption of Shakespeare's Henry V & The Edge of the World (1937) just because
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Love all of those movies minus the westerns... not a huge fan, there. Although I might give that particular one a chance if Redford starred, he's an incredible actor.
I'm a huge fan of David Lynch, so the Dune remake was a high priority watch for me .. yep, it did not disappoint. Looking forward to the second part. Blade runner is a MUST for every sci-fi nerd... haha. Plus, Harrison Ford, 'nuff said!! 👍🏻
Mads Mikkelsen can literally do no wrong in my eyes, lol! Valhalla Rising was a while ago, but I do remember the action and his role... He's phenomenal and totally underrated, imo. I loved the Hannibal series he did.
Benny and Joon is a top 20 favorite. Depp's nod to Buster Keaton is so wonderful, I could go on an on about Depp but I'll digress.. haha! ... Mary Stuart Masterson is masterful. I love her in this movie almost as much as I do in her roll as Watts in Some Kind of Wonderful... her and Eric Stoltz together ... oh sigh! ...
Kenneth Branagh makes me feel like the world is not as cruel as I suspect it is, given the fact that Allen Rickman was taken from our movie screens far far too soon, it's heartwarming to know that Kenneth kinda fills that void for me... at least a tiny bit. I truly do adore him and love his versatility, man he's just a talent through and through.
Yes, movies are a key factor in my entertainment!
Love love love, watching a new movie that surprises me with it's impact... which is becoming harder and harder to discover but I'll always keep trying!
🌹-🎬📽️
I'm a huge fan of David Lynch, so the Dune remake was a high priority watch for me .. yep, it did not disappoint. Looking forward to the second part. Blade runner is a MUST for every sci-fi nerd... haha. Plus, Harrison Ford, 'nuff said!! 👍🏻
Mads Mikkelsen can literally do no wrong in my eyes, lol! Valhalla Rising was a while ago, but I do remember the action and his role... He's phenomenal and totally underrated, imo. I loved the Hannibal series he did.
Benny and Joon is a top 20 favorite. Depp's nod to Buster Keaton is so wonderful, I could go on an on about Depp but I'll digress.. haha! ... Mary Stuart Masterson is masterful. I love her in this movie almost as much as I do in her roll as Watts in Some Kind of Wonderful... her and Eric Stoltz together ... oh sigh! ...
Kenneth Branagh makes me feel like the world is not as cruel as I suspect it is, given the fact that Allen Rickman was taken from our movie screens far far too soon, it's heartwarming to know that Kenneth kinda fills that void for me... at least a tiny bit. I truly do adore him and love his versatility, man he's just a talent through and through.
Yes, movies are a key factor in my entertainment!
Love love love, watching a new movie that surprises me with it's impact... which is becoming harder and harder to discover but I'll always keep trying!
🌹-🎬📽️
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
25th May 2023 00:34am
Well, any lady that can tie Depp to Keaton knows her movies - and yes, I occasionally watch old Buster Keaton, Laurel and Hardy, & Thin Man movies 😉
Your turn for a question, if you care to...although I may plead the fifth 😁
Your turn for a question, if you care to...although I may plead the fifth 😁
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Name three favorite bucket list romantic kind of places/gestures/events you've always dreamed of going to or participating in...
Mine =
1. Lying naked under a Hawaiian waterfall with no one in sight except my soulmate... mesmerized and utterly ravenous for each other...
2. Cuddled together watching the Aurora Borealis for the first time.
3. Being told forever, and knowing without a doubt he 100% means it
Mine =
1. Lying naked under a Hawaiian waterfall with no one in sight except my soulmate... mesmerized and utterly ravenous for each other...
2. Cuddled together watching the Aurora Borealis for the first time.
3. Being told forever, and knowing without a doubt he 100% means it
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Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
25th May 2023 11:21pm
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
26th May 2023 2:06am
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
26th May 2023 2:14am
Its not easy being a redneck knuckle dragging caveman, but I wear it well 🌼
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26th May 2023 10:50am
Re: Re. A Penny For Your Thoughts
27th May 2023 1:15am
And third, the deepest for last @ https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/483220-third-by-random-chance/