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Hello
Darkness engulfs me
and makes my skin bleed,
again.
Heart beat lost in the rain
tears falling from my pain,
again.
As normal, I am sitting alone
with not emotions shown,
again.
Children laugh so brightly
yet the light does not touch me,
again.
Bruises hidden under lace
and hair shadowing my face,
again.
All the screaming replays in my mind
sends a chill of fear through my spine,
again.
Someone calls me broken today
and laughs as he walks away,
again.
Why can't anyone hear me
when I'm screaming?
Again...
"I'm your mind giving you
someone to talk to,
Hello.
Just cut the skin so tender
just give into the pain, surrender,
Hello.
In the back of your mind I shall stay
even in the darkness we can 'play',
Hello."
"Hello?"
and makes my skin bleed,
again.
Heart beat lost in the rain
tears falling from my pain,
again.
As normal, I am sitting alone
with not emotions shown,
again.
Children laugh so brightly
yet the light does not touch me,
again.
Bruises hidden under lace
and hair shadowing my face,
again.
All the screaming replays in my mind
sends a chill of fear through my spine,
again.
Someone calls me broken today
and laughs as he walks away,
again.
Why can't anyone hear me
when I'm screaming?
Again...
"I'm your mind giving you
someone to talk to,
Hello.
Just cut the skin so tender
just give into the pain, surrender,
Hello.
In the back of your mind I shall stay
even in the darkness we can 'play',
Hello."
"Hello?"
Published 14th Apr 2012
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14th Apr 2012 4:24am
14th Apr 2012 5:00am
Lol, a girl just sent me the link to the song saying my poem reminded her of that song. ^ ^;
14th Apr 2012 5:09am
15th Apr 2012 5:30am
7th Jul 2012 3:59pm
Reading this make me feel the feeling, share the feeling. While not a cutter, I am intrigued by those who are. I have a Haiku on cutting that I will upload eventually.
7th Jul 2012 9:54pm
I've been a cutter for many years now and only just recently have started to break my habit, so I am glad your received the feeling I was portraying through this poem, though it is not the bet one I've published about cutting here on DUP.
7th Jul 2012 10:55pm
8th Jul 2012 5:53am
My two poems focused mainly on cutting.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/48325-ode-to-a-razor-for-levis-strongest-love/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/47011-cut/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/48325-ode-to-a-razor-for-levis-strongest-love/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/47011-cut/
8th Jul 2012 3:33pm
Thanks, I'll check them out. In return for the favor here is a Haiku I wrote for one of my characters in a novel I am writing:
Each cut liberates
Red truth always flows downward
My only friend
Each cut liberates
Red truth always flows downward
My only friend
8th Jul 2012 10:40pm
