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Undress
The bones of my body are
in starvation for your touch.
A feast of you is exultation.
Undress your flesh,
so I can see your soul.
Peer in at my secrets you stole.
in starvation for your touch.
A feast of you is exultation.
Undress your flesh,
so I can see your soul.
Peer in at my secrets you stole.
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Re. Undress
4th May 2023 8:33am
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4th May 2023 10:22am
Re. Undress
4th May 2023 12:26pm
Hello Delia
There is something to be said about undressing your flesh in front of another human being, when you said "undress your flesh" that struck me most deeply in your poem, most human beings can have sex and it will certainly not mean much afterwards, but to undress your flesh and reveal your soul to another human, that is exciting, intimidating and annihilating enough to any being, there is definitely more spirit and hunger for that and everybody is starving for it especially in an age where everything can be filled with uncertainty, you bare much with very little wording and not many can master that which is beautiful.
Kind Regards
-A
There is something to be said about undressing your flesh in front of another human being, when you said "undress your flesh" that struck me most deeply in your poem, most human beings can have sex and it will certainly not mean much afterwards, but to undress your flesh and reveal your soul to another human, that is exciting, intimidating and annihilating enough to any being, there is definitely more spirit and hunger for that and everybody is starving for it especially in an age where everything can be filled with uncertainty, you bare much with very little wording and not many can master that which is beautiful.
Kind Regards
-A
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4th May 2023 12:55pm
Hi! My next relationship, I hope to undress to reveal my soul. I love to read your comments, as you see within the words of my poem, things I may not even see myself.
It's funny how, at least I see my writing. As much as I liked the part undress your flesh, so I can see your soul - I also felt like I used too few words.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your thoughts and encouragement. I find your writing so beautiful, that your opinion means a lot.
Have a beautiful day 🌹
It's funny how, at least I see my writing. As much as I liked the part undress your flesh, so I can see your soul - I also felt like I used too few words.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your thoughts and encouragement. I find your writing so beautiful, that your opinion means a lot.
Have a beautiful day 🌹
Re. Undress
4th May 2023 2:00pm
In life, my family bares the flesh for our souls become as one in family and love. The measure of a person is their integrity and truth is in the balance on nature. Nature provides the flesh and peaceful serenity. What you do with it is your measure.
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4th May 2023 3:10pm
Your insight reflects your personal experience.
This was kinda a mini fantasy.
What I want going forward is to strip away the flesh to see the beauty of the soul.
Thx for reading
This was kinda a mini fantasy.
What I want going forward is to strip away the flesh to see the beauty of the soul.
Thx for reading
Re. Undress
4th May 2023 3:24pm
Being this kind of vulnerable is tantamount to the sheer strength that it oftentimes takes to be so open and willingly self aware enough to offer one's self in complete, to another worthy soul.... It's bravery incarnate.
Really impactful ink, dear poetess.
It's lovely to see you 🦋
🌹💙
-B
Really impactful ink, dear poetess.
It's lovely to see you 🦋
🌹💙
-B
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Re. Undress
4th May 2023 4:57pm
It's wonderful to see your beautiful face.
Thanks so much for reading and nice comments. I treasure comments from you. 😊 ❤️
Thanks so much for reading and nice comments. I treasure comments from you. 😊 ❤️
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5th May 2023 3:16am
Thank you so much, your opinion always makes me feel happy!
Have a great night. 🌙
Have a great night. 🌙
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