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Flames Obsession
There's a blue flame that dances in fire..
It's a scorching light of my burning desire..
Those beautiful embers of orange and black..
The burning light of my love that I can't hold back..
The waves of hot energy moving through the coals..
To love you forever is my only life's goal..
Like a moth I'm attracted to this beautiful warmth..
This attraction in my heart you've unknowingly brought forth..
It's a scorching light of my burning desire..
Those beautiful embers of orange and black..
The burning light of my love that I can't hold back..
The waves of hot energy moving through the coals..
To love you forever is my only life's goal..
Like a moth I'm attracted to this beautiful warmth..
This attraction in my heart you've unknowingly brought forth..
Published 2nd May 2023
| Edited 6th May 2023
Author's Note
I wanted to write more but felt this was enough. I may end up with the rest of the words later.
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2nd May 2023 8:57pm
i like what You've spilled thus far
and
perhaps You could COLLAB with another here who is talented at rhyming? (not me, though -- i suck at rhyming)
and
perhaps You could COLLAB with another here who is talented at rhyming? (not me, though -- i suck at rhyming)
2nd May 2023 10:11pm
Thank you, I love rhyming. Sometimes I force it instead of let it flow. I'm not much into collaboration just because I like to keep my work my own and my ideas. I've hit a wall right now so it may be a while before I get inspired to write again.
2nd May 2023 10:14pm
there are apps that enable and help with rhyming
But i can appreciate what You shared with respect to Your personal work.
But i can appreciate what You shared with respect to Your personal work.
3rd May 2023 1:16am
Thank you very much, have you read any of my other? I shall take a look at yours. I only just started writing less than a year ago. It's been a great stress release as well as therapeutic. I have made some great friends here as well. I'm still learning all there is to writing but the rhyming aabb just gives me the structure that I need if that makes sense. If you are interested in the horror and beauty of love and death, as well as the minds twisted side, then I would suggest poet consequentialchaos. He gives a visual image when reading and cleverly written.
