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Subplatonic Level Love
It sounds rambling but my days
they are always the same.
I live adrift on the surface of the water.
My thoughts are limited.
You are the responsible environment
for keeping me in suspense.
Sweet kiss like water from a well.
Turn me into salt from ancient rocks.
That burns the matter of your lips.
I wanted to qualify my feelings, name them!
I wanted to dissolve doubts, give them wind!
I wanted to shatter the icebergs in your desert!
I wanted to float forever
in the crystal of lost eyes...
in the most abundant tears on the planet.
I wish I had the clarity to understand
what you shut up in the drops of sweat.
I wanted to know anything about salt chemistry.
PAR
they are always the same.
I live adrift on the surface of the water.
My thoughts are limited.
You are the responsible environment
for keeping me in suspense.
Sweet kiss like water from a well.
Turn me into salt from ancient rocks.
That burns the matter of your lips.
I wanted to qualify my feelings, name them!
I wanted to dissolve doubts, give them wind!
I wanted to shatter the icebergs in your desert!
I wanted to float forever
in the crystal of lost eyes...
in the most abundant tears on the planet.
I wish I had the clarity to understand
what you shut up in the drops of sweat.
I wanted to know anything about salt chemistry.
PAR
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