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Subplatonic Level Love

It sounds rambling but my days
they are always the same.
I live adrift on the surface of the water.

My thoughts are limited.
You are the responsible environment
for keeping me in suspense.

Sweet kiss like water from a well.
Turn me into salt from ancient rocks.
That burns the matter of your lips.

I wanted to qualify my feelings, name them!
I wanted to dissolve doubts, give them wind!
I wanted to shatter the icebergs in your desert!

I wanted to float forever
in the crystal of lost eyes...
in the most abundant tears on the planet.

I wish I had the clarity to understand
what you shut up in the drops of sweat.
I wanted to know anything about salt chemistry.


PAR
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
Published
Author's Note
I wanted to float forever.
I wanted to float forever.
I wanted to float forever.
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