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long waited weekend...
like the
cracks in
the drought
long to heal
in the rain
excitement
in the wait
was mutual
like balloons
held underwater
bursting out
like serpents
wrapped around
each other
please
take my
breath
inhale
exhale
slowly
as you ride
whisper
something
to tickle
everything
yearning
inside
to live in
this ecstasy
and rejuvenate
the night
I would
drown
the sun
again and
again
Published 18th Apr 2023
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18th Apr 2023 4:07pm
19th Apr 2023 00:35am
Wow, Vick
This is a wellspring of heated metaphoric passion, which warmly washes over the reader to entice, so beautifully. There's this deep pleasure that truly captivates with such creative allure... and that last stanza— oh myyy!! 👌🏻
🔥 🔥 🔥
I truly loved this minimalistic erotik morsel.
Well done and good luck in the comp!
🌹💙
B
This is a wellspring of heated metaphoric passion, which warmly washes over the reader to entice, so beautifully. There's this deep pleasure that truly captivates with such creative allure... and that last stanza— oh myyy!! 👌🏻
🔥 🔥 🔥
I truly loved this minimalistic erotik morsel.
Well done and good luck in the comp!
🌹💙
B
19th Apr 2023 00:55am
