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You are a small town
I yearn to
know every
street and
curve of,
how the
birds sing
little tunes
of their own
as trees
gift air
into my
passage.
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Re. You are a small town
16th Apr 2023 1:59pm
Re: Re. You are a small town
17th Apr 2023 2:11am
Hello DaVinci_07
Pleased to make your acquaintance, i'm happy you read into the sly parallels that linger inbetween my words, it's always fun to think outside of the box, it reminds me how we can become lazy by using the same words or language, thank you for reading my work.
-A
Pleased to make your acquaintance, i'm happy you read into the sly parallels that linger inbetween my words, it's always fun to think outside of the box, it reminds me how we can become lazy by using the same words or language, thank you for reading my work.
-A
Re: Re. You are a small town
17th Apr 2023 1:37pm
Re. You are a small town
17th Apr 2023 1:10am
Hi Neves, if you entered this into NorthernSoul's comp I hope you do well it suits the parameters excellently.
Belated welcome to the site.
Belated welcome to the site.
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Re: Re. You are a small town
17th Apr 2023 2:16am
Hello DanielChristensen
I thought I would try the challenge, we become lazy in our words and our language, it's fun to think outside the box and test the ability to write more abstract, there has been some wonderful entries and i'm sure the judging will be done fairly and accordingly, thank you for reading my work and for your gentle words of encouragement.
-A
I thought I would try the challenge, we become lazy in our words and our language, it's fun to think outside the box and test the ability to write more abstract, there has been some wonderful entries and i'm sure the judging will be done fairly and accordingly, thank you for reading my work and for your gentle words of encouragement.
-A
Re. You are a small town
17th Apr 2023 1:33am
Dear N,
Another lovely write. You brilliantly convey a sensuality through nature in this piece that is subtle but oh so evident. Well done. H🌷
Another lovely write. You brilliantly convey a sensuality through nature in this piece that is subtle but oh so evident. Well done. H🌷
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Re: Re. You are a small town
17th Apr 2023 2:21am
Hello Honoria
Goodness gracious me you have commented so much I will forever be indebt to you, i'm happy you felt the sensuality conveying through nature in this poem, I think we all universally hold a primal part in ourselves that craves to be recognised, thank you for reading my work and for your kindness.
-A
Goodness gracious me you have commented so much I will forever be indebt to you, i'm happy you felt the sensuality conveying through nature in this poem, I think we all universally hold a primal part in ourselves that craves to be recognised, thank you for reading my work and for your kindness.
-A
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