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her (tanka)
night leads long to light
knocks to dare unopened door
breathless holds her storm
verses twined 'tween timid souls
flutters felt forevermore
knocks to dare unopened door
breathless holds her storm
verses twined 'tween timid souls
flutters felt forevermore
Published 15th Apr 2023
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16th Apr 2023 12:58pm
You deliver such lovely brevity to each line which makes the 'dance of it all' such a gorgeous reading experience... I melted completely at "breathless holds her storm".... it's one helluva line!
Thanks for the stellar ink, Tim
🌹💙 - B
Thanks for the stellar ink, Tim
🌹💙 - B
