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Burning Yearning Love
This feeling in my body burns...
Because of you my soul it yearns...
I could not imagine being apart...
I live for you and have from the start...
This love of mine is always yours...
I'll never close these chamber door's...
I'd die before I renounced my last name...
I know that you would do the same...
Your love for me, it keeps me alive...
It pumps my blood till the day I die...
Your love for me like a dragon it breathes...
An endless blaze that lives for eternity....
No fires of hell nor demons below...
Could keep me from our love that grows...
No space nor time could keep us apart...
They'd have to tear out my beating heart...
Oh my love, you're only mine
My only love till the end of time
After time has long gone by...
You're still my love "FOREVER" I cry...
Because of you my soul it yearns...
I could not imagine being apart...
I live for you and have from the start...
This love of mine is always yours...
I'll never close these chamber door's...
I'd die before I renounced my last name...
I know that you would do the same...
Your love for me, it keeps me alive...
It pumps my blood till the day I die...
Your love for me like a dragon it breathes...
An endless blaze that lives for eternity....
No fires of hell nor demons below...
Could keep me from our love that grows...
No space nor time could keep us apart...
They'd have to tear out my beating heart...
Oh my love, you're only mine
My only love till the end of time
After time has long gone by...
You're still my love "FOREVER" I cry...
Published 14th Apr 2023
Author's Note
I really wanted this to have the 1700s affect of using thee thou thine and thy. I have not quit grasped the way of using them correctly. Someone please direct me to a good site or video for learning please. It would sound so much better if I could grasp the correct way of using those words.
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15th Apr 2023 4:00am
Dear SW,
I’m sorry I can’t advise you towards a thee, thou and thine site but I can say unequivocally that this poem definitely has that vibe. It’s a love read with a great meter. Full of love and romance.
Very enjoyable. H🌷
I’m sorry I can’t advise you towards a thee, thou and thine site but I can say unequivocally that this poem definitely has that vibe. It’s a love read with a great meter. Full of love and romance.
Very enjoyable. H🌷
15th Apr 2023 5:55am
That is ok I will figure it out hopefully. Thank you as well, I'm happy you enjoyed it! It filles me with a little happiness when I can do the same for someone else! You are most kind 🙂
