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The Parenthetic Reply

(The footsteps that you're hearing)
(And my breathing that collides)
(My hands that touch your body)
(To feel the softness it provides)

(I am here to give you pleasure)
(In the quietness with love)
(Gazing in your limpid eyes)
(As I'm hovering above)

(I hear you gasping, panting)
(As I tease you with my tongue)
(You reach beneath the coverings)
(And you feel how I am hung)

(You wrap your hand 'round my erection)
(Feel the hardness that you seek)
(Don't stop now, I'm in my ecstasy)
(Let my fingers take a peek)

(Your dampness is so welcoming)
(Your breasts are in my view)
(I'm sucking on each nipple)
(Then I'll dine upon your dew)

(I'll hum a tune of love to you)
(As I relish your abyss)
(Our tongues are intertwining)
(As we meet dawn with a kiss)

(We culminate our feelings, as we release between your thighs)
Written by eightmore
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Author's Note
This is my answer, by itself, to Sweet Kitty Cat's "The Sweetest Rush", to see the blending see my "The Sweetest Rush and the Parenthetic Reply".
Comments are so welcome. I have done similar things before but never quite this way. Thank you Sweet Kitty Cat for "The Sweetest Rush" that began this whole thing. Hope you don't mind my embellishment.
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