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Territory
I want to bury my face
on your chest
brushing it against
hundreds of wildflowers
The earthy scent
spirals up
shooting across veins
hitting my sky
exploding stars
into thousand pieces
like meteoric showers
In cold November nights
Let me tread on your
ribbed terrain
with my lips
Let me be washed over
by its warmth
it's my heaven
my playfield
my territory
that I reclaim
when layers of silken dark veils
slowly fall over
the hazy twilights
Published 8th Apr 2023
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This creates powerful images that move the reader.
It hits you straight away.
Regards
James
It hits you straight away.
Regards
James
9th Apr 2023 10:19am
Anonymous
12th Apr 2023 1:10pm
Hi InDreamz,
Hope all is well?
Beautiful!
Take care.
X
Hope all is well?
Beautiful!
Take care.
X
12th Apr 2023 1:14pm
Thank you so much, dear Wired6 for a lovely comment. I'm very much honoured by the reading list add😊🌹😊
Anonymous
12th Apr 2023 1:16pm
My Pleasure.
Take care.
X
Take care.
X
Anonymous
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22nd Apr 2023 2:10pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 nice musing queen 👸 please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
24th Apr 2023 9:12am
Thank you so much for your awesome comments, dear poet. Appreciate you reading and commenting on my piece. 😊🌹
23rd Apr 2023 3:44pm
Those moments of desire when we reveal our intent.
Well said.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well said.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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29th Apr 2023 5:27pm
Wow you created a beautiful gem right here InDreamz... very well written! Have a wonderful weekend :)
2nd Jul 2023 1:23pm
Thank you so much, dear poet for such gracious words. Very much appreciate you stopping by. 😊🌹
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2nd Jul 2023 1:06pm
For me this goes beyond just attraction between two people or even romance. It is an appreciation of beauty that includes the natural surroundings. So nicely done.
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11th Jul 2023 1:08pm
This poem really captures the special feeling of finding comfort in someone's arms and how it can awaken our senses. The descriptions of wildflowers, earthy smells, and shooting stars make the whole experience even more magical and meaningful. It reminds us of the deep connections we can have with others and how love can truly transform us.
22nd Jul 2023 6:25pm
So wonderful to read your poems again, and your picture is gorgeous because it is YOU. Hugs and peace, Oral
1st Aug 2023 7:12pm
The moment and emotion is beautifully penned .. I can sense the yearness and desire
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28th Feb 2024 3:59pm
Just read this.. again.. and wanted you to know, I'd offer to read your "map".. I'd explore your valleys, lush gardens, streams, and mountains! 🙂
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❤️❤️❤️
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