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ALONE
Can i be alone,
The feelings everyday I own,
They want to rip it down the wall of stone,
But being alone i rule the throne,
What use is it to moan and grown,,
I fall apart by post Malone,
The feelings I’ve felt I want to be overgrown,
The storm inside the mind is a cyclone,
Numb in a crowd I’m a drone,
Snakes in the grass cut them out I’ve mown,
Mistakes from the past my regrets I want to atone,
At the mental gates is the fall of Rome
The feelings everyday I own,
They want to rip it down the wall of stone,
But being alone i rule the throne,
What use is it to moan and grown,,
I fall apart by post Malone,
The feelings I’ve felt I want to be overgrown,
The storm inside the mind is a cyclone,
Numb in a crowd I’m a drone,
Snakes in the grass cut them out I’ve mown,
Mistakes from the past my regrets I want to atone,
At the mental gates is the fall of Rome
Published 5th Apr 2023
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I'm not sure what you mean by: 'I fall apart by post Malone? I like what you've written, the choice of words are strong but their impact could be more effective if the rhythm was tighter. I'm happy to PM you with my ideas.
