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weird
despite the many waves
the ocean is one
despite the many colors
the rainbow is one
but here.. one world
and one God
yet there are
many different human beings
and many many religions.
the ocean is one
despite the many colors
the rainbow is one
but here.. one world
and one God
yet there are
many different human beings
and many many religions.
Published 1st Apr 2023
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1st Apr 2023 9:40am
Dear D,
The irony of it all. Your assessment of nature and religion in this poem is simple and straightforward yet offers the reader a moment of “yeah, why is that?”. I really enjoyed the reflection of this write. I also liked the formatting. It’s clean organized stanzas leant itself to the ideas presented. H🌷
The irony of it all. Your assessment of nature and religion in this poem is simple and straightforward yet offers the reader a moment of “yeah, why is that?”. I really enjoyed the reflection of this write. I also liked the formatting. It’s clean organized stanzas leant itself to the ideas presented. H🌷
1st Apr 2023 10:16am
Hey there
Honoria
Thank you very much for assessing my poem so beautifully. I'm glad that you enjoyed my words. 💛
Honoria
Thank you very much for assessing my poem so beautifully. I'm glad that you enjoyed my words. 💛
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jan 2024 00:45am
1st Apr 2023 2:29pm
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1st Apr 2023 3:02pm
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