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Prayer
He talks of cars
That purple card
Such loving calm-
No time to mope.
Making plans
This loving man
Not seeing less than
I cannot cope.
With wishing dreams
Their friend unclean
No hope to glean
Hand me to the rope.
Take me from
These crying eyes
No more to lie
To my end elope.
They cannot see
The rot inside
This broken me
Where is the rope?
No words can stop
Or time forgot
These sins begot
Embrace me, dear rope.
Nothing will change
No hearts exchange
I cannot leave pain
This sacred rope.
And here we end
No memories to fend
To my innocence I lend:
My blessed, final rope.
Published 28th Mar 2023
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There's often difficulty in trying to reply to a piece that's just ravaged with pain and suffering. I know I can feel like my attempt to do so might be too lame and/or too weird sounding... Yet I feel deeply that you must, please know how glad I was and am that you are here. YOU put a smile on my face today, in seeing your return and willingness to share your writing..... I was so stoked! and within that there's hope, if even a semblance.... there's still hope. Is my point
Reach out, if you're needing to... I implore ... because I very much enjoy your style and presence, too...and would be crushed to no longer have the feeling of excitement at seeing you in my updates!
I hear you.... please keep the conversation going and the poetry flowing, my friend.
🌹 💙
Thank you for your thoughtfulness on my little poems
In deep kindness,
-B
Reach out, if you're needing to... I implore ... because I very much enjoy your style and presence, too...and would be crushed to no longer have the feeling of excitement at seeing you in my updates!
I hear you.... please keep the conversation going and the poetry flowing, my friend.
🌹 💙
Thank you for your thoughtfulness on my little poems
In deep kindness,
-B
