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What Does That Matter
What Does That Matter
I was watching my best friend take a dump in my front yard, and I thought, "Damn, I'll bet that dogs get embarrassed too."
She's starting to bring me her leash whenever she needs to feed the kids, 8 separate lunches.
Women only lose their minds 6 days out of the month. What does that matter?
I was watching my best friend take a dump in my front yard, and I thought, "Damn, I'll bet that dogs get embarrassed too."
She's starting to bring me her leash whenever she needs to feed the kids, 8 separate lunches.
Women only lose their minds 6 days out of the month. What does that matter?
Published 25th Mar 2023
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Know your partner from their point of view.
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25th Mar 2023 6:59pm
Hey, some of us lose our minds way more than that. Don’t hate.
Interesting. You started off super good with a sick kick, but the ambiguity in the transition sort of left left me like… huh.
Good to see you exploring. I
25th Mar 2023 9:33pm
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