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We can stand and build
Published 20th Mar 2023
| Edited 21st Mar 2023
Author's Note
NaPoWriMo 23 is just around the corner, if you are interested and want to join in or have some questions call by:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/12470/135/#560294
Hope to see some of you there!
Big thanks to Ahavati for the background image she used for this piece.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/12470/135/#560294
Hope to see some of you there!
Big thanks to Ahavati for the background image she used for this piece.
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20th Mar 2023 11:16pm
Ahavati did the visual for all of our team poems ☺️ (I just posted it 😇)
She did a beautiful job!
She did a beautiful job!
21st Mar 2023 8:17am
Oops my bad, Ahavati has worked her socks off! How could I get that wrong 😬 (thanks Ahavati😅) She did do a beautiful job!
21st Mar 2023 7:59am
Hi Fiftysevenhours,
I enjoyed your poem and presentation.
It gave me images of words as the water of life which is profound.
Also, the image of land between our fingers and hands is so fitting, especially when a pen is in those fingers.
Good read.
Regards,
BITS
I enjoyed your poem and presentation.
It gave me images of words as the water of life which is profound.
Also, the image of land between our fingers and hands is so fitting, especially when a pen is in those fingers.
Good read.
Regards,
BITS
21st Mar 2023 8:19am
Hello Bits,
Thank you, words as the water of life is good imagery.. always a pen close to hand!
Be well!
Thank you, words as the water of life is good imagery.. always a pen close to hand!
Be well!
21st Mar 2023 10:02am
18th May 2023 5:40am
Dear F,
I truly enjoyed the positive and encouraging message of this poem. Generating good can be a challenge and it’s wonderful when it’s done with no expectation of anything in return. Lovely write. H🌷
I truly enjoyed the positive and encouraging message of this poem. Generating good can be a challenge and it’s wonderful when it’s done with no expectation of anything in return. Lovely write. H🌷
2nd Apr 2024 00:21am
I didn't realize you'd even posted this! I was expecting to see today's post! It was a good one. Looks like it's going to be a phenomenal series!
2nd Apr 2024 8:59am
Thank you 😅 it's been a while since I posted any writes on my profile ...
