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The Train Ride Part 3

Fuck..I'm actually falling for this man and we just met .. and my couch.. what the fuck happened😩.. and did he really eat my ass like a fucking cupcake🧁🥴..

Yes girl...yes he did🤗.. but dam... I need to get him back for making me feel like a dam puppet of ecstasy.. "mmmmmmmm" I moaned out loud... But I didn't care..
"lay back"  I spoke in a firm tone to him.

He abligeged ... With his dick pulsating, I could see the pre cum dripping.. I knowticed earlier he was staring at my legs.. and my feet.

Wait..aaahaaa does he have a fetish... Because the way he sucked my toes.. Fuck!!! I love that shit!! Ok be cool girl.. be cool... Your thinking to much.. jus go with the flow.. make him want u so bad.. He fucking goes crazy..

Because ... Fuck how the hell am I supposed to supervillain this man if my body is on reboot. I'm at 56% and loading...... Ok ok let's see how he likes this..

She slid her soles up and down his spit soaked dick.. as she felt his heart beat through the arch of her warm foot. She knew she had a cheat code to his game.. .. Something of a leg up on him..

He moaned and closed his eyes... And then she knew it was time to show this motha fucka what she was about!!!

Her head game was impressive, and she knew this.. Impeccable even... Without notice.. she engulfed is thobing member and slid him inside her inviting mouth.  Her body was in tune to his.. And she knew it was time to pull an orgasm from this man she just met less than an hour ago.

Steady pace... Slippery contact and following the guidance of his hips.. She proceeded to suck the life force out of this man.. his moans were music to her ears and a symphony to her thobing pussy..

She knew he had more to give her.. and that's what she wanted.. She needed to feel him inside of her.. His length was decent, a good 8 inches, and with a thickness she could grab.. this made her even more excited..

Without hesitation or warning.. she slipped him inside of her.. Tight and warm she griped every inch of him with purpose.. and slowly relaxed her walls so he could feel how ready she was. He fought her strokes because he knew she would end his quest to dominate my body.. To control my pussy.. fuck that...

Wait wait.. before I knew it he flipped me over. And proceeded to push my legs back towards my ears!! "Fuuuuuuuuuck" I shouted!!! Uncontrollably!!!!  His stroke was deep... I sware I felt that shit in my stomach!! Did he just get harder? Oh.. my fucking.. god he did!

 This was too much for one session.. I needed  to catch my breath.. Again!! But dam what else did he have in-store for me😝..

His body was radiating energy.. His dick was moving my doubts and fears to the side.. And slipping past my boundaries. "Fuuuuuuck" I moaned again uncontrollably.. with another orgasm not far behind...

The pressure was crazy.. I came so hard I heard it spash on his dick and stomach!! It..It sounded like a water hose when you put your thumb over the nozzle.. My floor was fucked.. but... FUCK IT....

I shook violent and did not know what or where I was in this moment. I felt my body being pulled to a 4th dimension.. Hell breaking the fifth wall!!! But wait as I was cumming.. He..Sucked My Heel and ran his tongue down the length of my arch..

AAAAHHHHFHUUCKK IM.. CUMING..AGAIN!!!! I screamed!!!!

And this time I'm not sure where the fuck all of this fluid came from.. But God dam!!! I was laying in a fucking pool !!!
"FUCK ME HARDER" I screamed as I grabbed his throat ... And that did it!!! That turned him the fuck on..  he crashed my insides with such force. I could feel another orgasm dying to come out!!!

I shoved my toes in his mouth and tilted my pelvis to the heavens so he could hit my G spot with ease...  The shit sounded like 4 hands slapping a waterbed .. An applause of sweat...fluids and no remorse for these two bodies intertwined.🥹👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿🥳

Just then he leaned in and kissed me...
All while keeping pace while fucking the life out of my body.. Who is this man and where are his stalkers?

Just as I couldn't take anymore... He drove as deep as he could while pushing my ankles towards the puddle we made..

His strokes were deep and more barbaric than before.. Was this his peak... 👀..
Could this be what I've been longing for... God let him fill up my pussy with his hot sticky cum.

And just like that.. right on cue... He let out a growl that shook the walls of my poor apartment..

"Did he just cum inside of me" she asked herself? "Fuck it let this birth control do it's thing!!" He was stroking like a motha fucka and she loved every nano second of it!!! The way he smelled... His touch... And omfg he ate pussy ...like....nothing I ever felt... The detail of intricacies...his energy...

His body went limp after he came.. I knew I had him.. I stached his essence and frankly I didn't want to give it back... Not...jus ..yet..

He rolled off and lay there heavy breathing... Dick still spewing out cum ... Eyes closed while he was reaching for air.. I hopped up with every ounce of energy I had left and sucked the remaining life force from his body..

Licking my plate clean and asking him
"Do you like it when I clean up the mess we made?"

We lay there both in a daze... Sex funky.. wett. Sticky and both with honors...

I asked him "let's shower and see where the rest of the day takes us once we wake up"

He spoke with not much life in him and said
"I'm down with that... "

Written by AquariusThoughts (Ajan Hilliard)
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Author's Note
This is the ending of two strangers that met on day on a train. They both were perceptive and in tune to their desires. I tried to play out this from both perspectives. I still have a-lot of practice to do when writing. But I hope you all enjoy reading my thoughts. There will be more to come. This writing thing has always been a passion of mine. So I guess you can say I've finally found an outlet to create..

Thank you once again and I will also be reading others work to.. I can't wait !!!

Much love...
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