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Beginnings and Endings
Published 25th Feb 2023
Author's Note
Based on a diary entry from last month after my married lover and I ended our relationship.
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25th Feb 2023 1:55pm
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25th Feb 2023 2:49pm
you are adventurous I don't want anymore heartbreaks
so I decided that's it is doesn't work out no
I might change my mind later but I hate pain...
this spoke to me ❤️
so I decided that's it is doesn't work out no
I might change my mind later but I hate pain...
this spoke to me ❤️
27th Feb 2023 12:35pm
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- Edited 16th Mar 2023 7:45pm
25th Feb 2023 4:05pm
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25th Feb 2023 6:44pm
Holding on to the beginnings, we never let love grow and thus, sew the seeds of the endings. Beginnings are the addiction and endings are the withdraw but the high we feel in the center of this human maelstrom is worth the price of our soul.
26th Feb 2023 3:07am
You have to believe in love but you can't belive in a guarantee. Keep on writing.
27th Feb 2023 7:58am
I dabble every blue moon to listen to country. This poem reminded me of my fist listen to "The Dance" by Garth Brooks. (okay my jazz sensibilities were very happy with a version that had a sax).
The philosophical hue can't be avoided.
The philosophical hue can't be avoided.
27th Feb 2023 12:34pm
That's a beautiful insight I hadn't thought of. Thank you for sharing. Oh, and I like some jazz too:)
2nd Mar 2023 11:48am
