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Morning Sunshine
It's lovely when the early morning sun
Brings service into focus. Nothing else
Matters, as you show me how the wealth
Of manhood must be tasted. It is fun.
I feel your hand clenched in my hair. As one,
We move together. There's no need for stealth,
Yet, we are quiet, as your pre-cum melts
Between these lips. It flows over the tongue.
It is the precursor of further floods
To fill your sweet cunt's mouth as you watch on
And hold me to slow oral pleasure - see.
I listen to you murmur all the "shoulds"
Your little cum dump learns to build upon,
Showing that sunny service is lovely.
Brings service into focus. Nothing else
Matters, as you show me how the wealth
Of manhood must be tasted. It is fun.
I feel your hand clenched in my hair. As one,
We move together. There's no need for stealth,
Yet, we are quiet, as your pre-cum melts
Between these lips. It flows over the tongue.
It is the precursor of further floods
To fill your sweet cunt's mouth as you watch on
And hold me to slow oral pleasure - see.
I listen to you murmur all the "shoulds"
Your little cum dump learns to build upon,
Showing that sunny service is lovely.
Author's Note
A bright Sunday morning leaves one in need of a filling - this sonnet helps, I hope. Good to know if you find your Sundays fulfilling too. Share your delights but please don't borrow mine.
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Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 11:31am
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19th Feb 2023 5:44pm
I'm glad you were able to empathise with this - hope your day was glorious
Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 1:05pm
Delightful solution to the morning stiffness affliction.
Your servitude appreciated.
Your servitude appreciated.
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Re: Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 5:45pm
Re. Morning Sunshine
My cum is sweet as I consume plentiful amounts of fresh fruit daily. You are what you eat rings true .... I'd love to fill you with sweetness...
BIG BOLD LIKE
BIG BOLD LIKE
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19th Feb 2023 5:46pm
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19th Feb 2023 6:20pm
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19th Feb 2023 8:18pm
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19th Feb 2023 8:43pm
Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 4:51pm
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19th Feb 2023 5:47pm
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19th Feb 2023 6:34pm
Oh, how you "raise" my awareness about the tight gap of nuance betwixt submission and reception!
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Re: Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 8:17pm
Re: Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 9:26pm
Your remark about female perspective had me off on a cerebral tangent about the nature of submission as opposed to the nature of reception.
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Re: Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 10:17pm
Re: Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 10:31pm
Oh, sorry. I got stuck in metaphor mode which had me thinking of ejaculate as like a radio transmission, with the lady in the role of receiver.
That as an option for the dominator and submissive roles so often spoken of.
I know, I know...I am a weirdo.
That as an option for the dominator and submissive roles so often spoken of.
I know, I know...I am a weirdo.
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19th Feb 2023 10:37pm
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19th Feb 2023 10:50pm
Re. Morning Sunshine
Anonymous
19th Feb 2023 5:52pm
It's always a sensual treat to read
Your forays into erotica and intimacy
Your forays into erotica and intimacy

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19th Feb 2023 5:55pm
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20th Feb 2023 10:26pm
Re. Morning Sunshine
19th Feb 2023 9:29pm