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Lunch Time
Bathed in flame she walked
not with a purposeful stride
nor with hesitant step
but in slow languid swaying
of her manifest desires
she drapes herself around me
her robe floating to the ground
lilac scented hair enveloping me
warm breasts gently caressing my back
strong yet wholly feminine arms surround me
clever hands undo my belt, my zipper
slowly teasing they way between my legs
all the while she's nibbling my ear
and these clever, clever hands are hot
as they play with my scrotum
and then my cock
I grow hard, rock hard
almost throbbing in pain
she lets out a shivering sigh
"I was just checking dear"
"I'm glad you haven't forgotten me"
"this morning was so long ago"
not with a purposeful stride
nor with hesitant step
but in slow languid swaying
of her manifest desires
she drapes herself around me
her robe floating to the ground
lilac scented hair enveloping me
warm breasts gently caressing my back
strong yet wholly feminine arms surround me
clever hands undo my belt, my zipper
slowly teasing they way between my legs
all the while she's nibbling my ear
and these clever, clever hands are hot
as they play with my scrotum
and then my cock
I grow hard, rock hard
almost throbbing in pain
she lets out a shivering sigh
"I was just checking dear"
"I'm glad you haven't forgotten me"
"this morning was so long ago"
Published 13th Feb 2023
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13th Feb 2023 2:04am
13th Feb 2023 7:33am
dear LDF thanks for you kind words. My lunches have never been so wickedly fun. I seem to have fallen in with a fast crowd here on DUP that is eroding my natural shyness. *blush*
13th Feb 2023 6:27am
Way for a woman to get a man up - to possibly get off with him. Would feel nice to be grabbed that way. Poem paints a visualisable scene.
Some people might question the aptness of "floating to the ground" about a robe. Floating usually means staying bouyant rather than succumbing to gravity.
Some people might question the aptness of "floating to the ground" about a robe. Floating usually means staying bouyant rather than succumbing to gravity.
13th Feb 2023 7:28am
Hey SS, how are you. Thanks for reading this wicked dream.
About the robe - The image and feeling I am trying to instill is of a slow striptease as the women in question slowly lets the robe slip through her fingers as if it's floating to the ground. If that's not the image you're getting I might need edit this at a later date. Let me know what you think.
About the robe - The image and feeling I am trying to instill is of a slow striptease as the women in question slowly lets the robe slip through her fingers as if it's floating to the ground. If that's not the image you're getting I might need edit this at a later date. Let me know what you think.
13th Feb 2023 6:09pm
I did get a mental picture of the robe slipping gently down her body onto the floor, so I myself am not fussed.
