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Last breath
Why is it the people closest to me I always lose?
It makes me feel so confused
I cant help them I tried
They just all go and commit suicide
It tears out my heart and soul
It leaves me lost and cold
I dont know how much more I can take
I need to end this for my own sake
My knife is by my bed
This single thought runs through my head
Now the knife slips
And slits my wrist
All of by blood drains
Falling from my veins
Now all there's left is death
This is my last breath
It makes me feel so confused
I cant help them I tried
They just all go and commit suicide
It tears out my heart and soul
It leaves me lost and cold
I dont know how much more I can take
I need to end this for my own sake
My knife is by my bed
This single thought runs through my head
Now the knife slips
And slits my wrist
All of by blood drains
Falling from my veins
Now all there's left is death
This is my last breath
Published 6th Apr 2012
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6th Apr 2012 11:21pm
It don't suppose it might have occurred to the subject of your poem that there might be a reason why she/he is still around.
19th Apr 2012 5:17am
25th Apr 2012 7:19pm
plese don't follow through
for i love you. though I have to admit this is a good poem.
for i love you. though I have to admit this is a good poem.
