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Blue Hot
Steaming into knowledge
A flame that is blue
I could burn with it forever
That's what I understand, walking in my shoes
Sweating intensely
My hair drenched with smoke
I'm reaching the highest climate
Don't know where else to go
Burning with what I need most
I'll push away the cold
The thought of my heart on auction
With people bidding till I'm sold
I don't mind the fire
It's making me know what's true
I'll let it leave me scars
For it knows just what to do...
I opened my eyes
After hearing the whistle of the pot
So I poured some tea, turned off the stove
Then cooled off my thoughts
A flame that is blue
I could burn with it forever
That's what I understand, walking in my shoes
Sweating intensely
My hair drenched with smoke
I'm reaching the highest climate
Don't know where else to go
Burning with what I need most
I'll push away the cold
The thought of my heart on auction
With people bidding till I'm sold
I don't mind the fire
It's making me know what's true
I'll let it leave me scars
For it knows just what to do...
I opened my eyes
After hearing the whistle of the pot
So I poured some tea, turned off the stove
Then cooled off my thoughts
Published 30th Jan 2023
| Edited 7th Apr 2023
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Originally written: 4/25/17
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Groovy blend of quasi-rhyme with stream of consciousness, and I love the pot whistle return to...re-al-a-tea.
30th Jan 2023 4:58pm
31st Jan 2023 11:12pm
Knowledge and wisdom gained on attention, understanding and experience; help open our eyes to the scoundrels that deceive. Some relations may get burnt along the way.
“No thief, however skillful, can rob one of knowledge, and that is why knowledge is the best and safest treasure to acquire.” – L. Frank Baum
Enjoy the tea.
“No thief, however skillful, can rob one of knowledge, and that is why knowledge is the best and safest treasure to acquire.” – L. Frank Baum
Enjoy the tea.
8th Feb 2023 12:02pm
Thank you so much everyone for the helpful and intelligent feedback observations. It helps and motivates me to keep going with my capabilities of causing visualizations to bring someone away from life for a moment with experiencing whatever their individual mind is able to create, by reading what I’ve created.
