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More Than the Sound of Words
The sound of your words simply radiates
Contentment in responses you have sought.
It helps me sense that I have what it takes
To be the one to please you. You have wrought
A bond that is invisible. And, yet,
It gleams much brighter, even as you state
The obvious, perhaps, but I forget
Exactly how it feels, until you make
Me recollect, through every twisting turn
In our exchanges, that I'm not displaced.
But central to your phrases. Burn your mark.
And, please, ensure my fortitude has graced
Our moments with the passions you've observed:
Each meaning more than just the sound of words.
Contentment in responses you have sought.
It helps me sense that I have what it takes
To be the one to please you. You have wrought
A bond that is invisible. And, yet,
It gleams much brighter, even as you state
The obvious, perhaps, but I forget
Exactly how it feels, until you make
Me recollect, through every twisting turn
In our exchanges, that I'm not displaced.
But central to your phrases. Burn your mark.
And, please, ensure my fortitude has graced
Our moments with the passions you've observed:
Each meaning more than just the sound of words.
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Re. More Than the Sound of Words
27th Jan 2023 5:00am
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27th Jan 2023 9:34am
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Re. More Than the Sound of Words
27th Jan 2023 11:14am
You damn well better be "central to his phrases"...
:)
I very much like the tone and author's voice...
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I very much like the tone and author's voice...
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5th Feb 2023 6:12pm
Re. More Than the Sound of Words
27th Jan 2023 2:47pm
I am enthralled by the sound of words...in the beginning....love the rhyming....L
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9th Apr 2023 1:45pm
you learn from each other and blend together making your combined whole so much stronger and more complete