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Vines
A life of luxury, visualized
A life of imitation you learn to despise
All forewarning and impeccable times
All these sensations from melodic rhymes
Hang on the vines
Twisting the lines
Selling the lives of the frivolous five
One in dismissal
Two to betray
Three to believe in this perilous way
Four in dishonour; these feverish lies
Five in the world these vines victimize
A life of imitation you learn to despise
All forewarning and impeccable times
All these sensations from melodic rhymes
Hang on the vines
Twisting the lines
Selling the lives of the frivolous five
One in dismissal
Two to betray
Three to believe in this perilous way
Four in dishonour; these feverish lies
Five in the world these vines victimize
Published 25th Jan 2023
| Edited 31st Oct 2024
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26th Jan 2023 1:10am
I like the way you incorporated the rising numbers into the flow of the poem. Interesting to contemplate.
26th Jan 2023 1:22am
