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Memory Lane
how can you be gone
when WE were meant to grow old,
i now walk alone
when WE were meant to grow old,
i now walk alone
Published 22nd Jan 2023
| Edited 8th Feb 2024
Author's Note
https://youtu.be/k4fKwOx6EAY
My dearest Tommy,
Sometimes I am just fine, then sometimes I am not.
I cried today, you know how I am...
I can't help it, it hurts.
Something inside me just doesn't comprehend
that I will never see you again.
The kid I grew up loving...gone.
Forever.
Even though it cuts me now,
thank you for letting me go when I needed to grow
and for always being my friend.
I wish I could have saved you from that end.
My dearest Tommy,
Sometimes I am just fine, then sometimes I am not.
I cried today, you know how I am...
I can't help it, it hurts.
Something inside me just doesn't comprehend
that I will never see you again.
The kid I grew up loving...gone.
Forever.
Even though it cuts me now,
thank you for letting me go when I needed to grow
and for always being my friend.
I wish I could have saved you from that end.
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22nd Jan 2023 8:23pm
22nd Jan 2023 8:30pm
22nd Jan 2023 9:01pm
Dear PS,
Your sorrow is palpable in the poem. Your authors note is a poem in itself. I’m sorry for your loss. Your love for your friend is a true homage. H🌷
Your sorrow is palpable in the poem. Your authors note is a poem in itself. I’m sorry for your loss. Your love for your friend is a true homage. H🌷
26th Jan 2023 6:15pm
22nd Jan 2023 10:09pm
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- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
26th Jan 2023 10:43pm
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6th Feb 2023 1:21pm
8th Feb 2023 3:28pm
Sad and wonderful poem at the same time. I think Tommy may still walk with you....!
8th Feb 2024 00:08am
