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Red High Heels
Tonight...I feel like
Letting my alter ego free
A Goddis in a Leather Bodice
Is who she be...
I like to call her Sugar..
cause her lovin is so sweet
and when I let her out
she likes Red High Heels
on her feet...
With legs shaved and toned
Sugar can carry her own
She can make a grown man cry
and a old man forget his name
and though many have tried..
Sugar just cant be tamed
inside her velvet purse
she keeps whipps and chains
Or a cat of nine tails
dependin on how she feels
But she's just not complete
Unless upon her feet
Are her 6 inch Red High Heels
I've tried to keep her locked
Deep inside but she demands to be free
She's willing and she wild...
She's a firey woman child...
and I think she's the Sassy side
To me.
Letting my alter ego free
A Goddis in a Leather Bodice
Is who she be...
I like to call her Sugar..
cause her lovin is so sweet
and when I let her out
she likes Red High Heels
on her feet...
With legs shaved and toned
Sugar can carry her own
She can make a grown man cry
and a old man forget his name
and though many have tried..
Sugar just cant be tamed
inside her velvet purse
she keeps whipps and chains
Or a cat of nine tails
dependin on how she feels
But she's just not complete
Unless upon her feet
Are her 6 inch Red High Heels
I've tried to keep her locked
Deep inside but she demands to be free
She's willing and she wild...
She's a firey woman child...
and I think she's the Sassy side
To me.
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Tonic
5th Apr 2012 00:12am
This so reminds me of Bria Valente's "Here Eye Come". To no one's shock the writer is Prince.
A very good write!
A very good write!
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re: Tonic
5th Apr 2012 3:28pm
I second that one. A very reflective poem about the other "Id". Scandalous!
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re: Tonic
6th Apr 2012 6:56pm
re: re: Tonic
6th Apr 2012 6:57pm
Mr. M, always a pleasure hearing from you.
thankyou... I think I hear some sexy Saxaphone in this one!
thankyou... I think I hear some sexy Saxaphone in this one!
Sexy!!
Anonymous
6th Apr 2012 5:44pm
Sexy for sure. The title caught me cause I have 3 poems with "Red Shoes". I have found that men think red is sexy, I own a pair. :) good poem.
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re: Sexy!!
6th Apr 2012 6:58pm
You are soo right Floweregirl!
Red is an attraction color
Im gonna play with this somemore!\
Thanks for reading!
Red is an attraction color
Im gonna play with this somemore!\
Thanks for reading!
Alright now!!!
6th Apr 2012 7:03pm
I love this sexy sassy side to you called Sugar..she is fierce, fiery and sexy!!! hot poem beautiful lady..peace Crim :)
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re: Alright now!!!
6th Apr 2012 7:38pm
Good
Anonymous
7th Apr 2012 1:27am
Heels are good.
Red is good.
This is good.
In fact it's ...
bad!
Nice to see your sassy side out for a stroll! R.
Red is good.
This is good.
In fact it's ...
bad!
Nice to see your sassy side out for a stroll! R.
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Nice Write Sexy
7th Apr 2012 1:53pm
It is a Beautifully written piece of Erotic Poetry.
It is a very strongly written and a good
Piece of written Art in fact a great write....
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If something wont quite add up.Forgive me
because sometimes my mind wanders when I see
a Beautiful Woman, like you.I just cant controle my pens when they hit the pape. Or my fingers on the computer keys. So if you read something not to your taste, Please forgive me!
Fancy coming to breakfast with me on wednesday?
I will pick you up on Tuesday night about 8pm
that should give me long enouth to make you hungry
PS
Its Breakfast in Bed!!!!
It is a very strongly written and a good
Piece of written Art in fact a great write....
...............................................
If something wont quite add up.Forgive me
because sometimes my mind wanders when I see
a Beautiful Woman, like you.I just cant controle my pens when they hit the pape. Or my fingers on the computer keys. So if you read something not to your taste, Please forgive me!
Fancy coming to breakfast with me on wednesday?
I will pick you up on Tuesday night about 8pm
that should give me long enouth to make you hungry
PS
Its Breakfast in Bed!!!!
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re: Nice Write Sexy
7th Apr 2012 7:32pm
Outstanding!
I love your statement
Thankyou ... I'll be ready at 7 30
Dont be late!
xoxo!
thanks for reading!
I love your statement
Thankyou ... I'll be ready at 7 30
Dont be late!
xoxo!
thanks for reading!
re: re: Nice Write Sexy
7th Apr 2012 11:35pm
just slip your coat
over your Birthday Suit
When you get hear I will
hang up your coat on a peg.
YOU WONT NEED ANYTHING MORE
THAN ME & YOU
TO WARM EACH OTHER UP
FROM YOUR INSIDE OUT
I HAVE PLENTY OF CREAM
ARE YOU HUNGRY?
I hope U are because I am
& I could eat U all night. xx
over your Birthday Suit
When you get hear I will
hang up your coat on a peg.
YOU WONT NEED ANYTHING MORE
THAN ME & YOU
TO WARM EACH OTHER UP
FROM YOUR INSIDE OUT
I HAVE PLENTY OF CREAM
ARE YOU HUNGRY?
I hope U are because I am
& I could eat U all night. xx
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re: re: re: Nice Write Sexy
9th Apr 2012 1:31am