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I LOVE YOU
A phrase that has no time construct
I could be lost at sea
So dark
The blacks shine
Shivering, swinging limbs
Raglan
Nothing but a drip along
I know he’d search for me
A piqued interest;
Beginning, middle, and end
Emotionally charged thoughts
I love you too.
Published 2nd Jan 2023
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3rd Jan 2023 2:25am
I can visualise hope shining from the blackness of the sea, as I read this!
3rd Jan 2023 2:40am
17th Jul 2024 3:57am
Ok I’m going to throw myself in the sea and see what happens… if I drown it’s your fault
