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Phone off
had my phone
with me
off for a day
like me
off for a day
I had the phone
I didn't have his hits
I didn't have his functions
I haven't heard from anyone
they were all off
like me
for one day
I was happy
and off
for one day
I was quieter
than on other days
I've been more disconnected
than on other days
wrote more poetry
than on other days
more poetry off
off for a day.
PAR
Published 29th Dec 2022
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29th Dec 2022 12:49pm
Well done!!
I keep thinking I'll have a go at this, but it's going to be HARD!! Especially since I've just come out of hospital and can't do much at all... my phone is providing all the entertainment. Still, there's always the laptop.
I keep thinking I'll have a go at this, but it's going to be HARD!! Especially since I've just come out of hospital and can't do much at all... my phone is providing all the entertainment. Still, there's always the laptop.
29th Dec 2022 12:57pm
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- Edited 16th Mar 2023 7:45pm
29th Dec 2022 4:22pm
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29th Dec 2022 4:27pm
Believe me, I know the feeling. Even though we're somewhat addicted to technology, It wouldn't hurt to take some time off our cellphones or in general, technology period. GREAT WRITING!!!
29th Dec 2022 9:34pm
