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15th Jan 2023 8:44am
Dear HL,
I liked the intensity of this write and the metaphor you use of the clacking bones. The references to ballet also lends fantastic imagery even without the pictured background. Great concept, wonderful write. H🌷
I liked the intensity of this write and the metaphor you use of the clacking bones. The references to ballet also lends fantastic imagery even without the pictured background. Great concept, wonderful write. H🌷
15th Jan 2023 6:13pm
