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Dear Darkness
Last toll, the bells call to midnight
I bid a final farewell to the moon
time has left me in abandonment
dear darkness, I shall succumb soon
Goodbye to the maker's mark
a blight often hidden from sight
tempting fate of the afflicted
offering gifts up to the night
goodbye to the pain and indignation
to those that open up closing wounds
winding up an idle mind
searching but cannot find
goodbye to the moon
and things that are just misunderstood
eventho we must move, we must go
on, for just another day
a good day
one might say
to the light and the adoration
but still
dear darkness,
I shall succumb soon
words, worthless, wither within the worry
gone, without the glory
no longer such is hurry
I bid a final farewell to the moon
time has left me in abandonment
dear darkness, I shall succumb soon
Goodbye to the maker's mark
a blight often hidden from sight
tempting fate of the afflicted
offering gifts up to the night
goodbye to the pain and indignation
to those that open up closing wounds
winding up an idle mind
searching but cannot find
goodbye to the moon
and things that are just misunderstood
eventho we must move, we must go
on, for just another day
a good day
one might say
to the light and the adoration
but still
dear darkness,
I shall succumb soon
words, worthless, wither within the worry
gone, without the glory
no longer such is hurry
Published 20th Dec 2022
Author's Note
Be mindful of those suffering this holiday season
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20th Dec 2022 12:43pm
hello dearest Tim I feel your deep pain here
I want to reach out to you
I don't if I can reach where you are
I don't know how to give up
my son is thirty five and I have to reconcile in my mind he's dying
I feel hurt of it but not fully the reality...
I keep pushing through I don't know what else to do.
I hope today is brighter for you
and some of your pain lifts ❤️
I want to reach out to you
I don't if I can reach where you are
I don't know how to give up
my son is thirty five and I have to reconcile in my mind he's dying
I feel hurt of it but not fully the reality...
I keep pushing through I don't know what else to do.
I hope today is brighter for you
and some of your pain lifts ❤️
20th Dec 2022 4:55pm
21st Dec 2022 3:39am
So powerful Tim, this touched the heart of this man
Keep inking the truth
Keep inking the truth
21st Dec 2022 9:06pm
24th Dec 2022 3:58am
Darkness is powerful. As dark as this will sound, I wonder how some feel before they decide to take their own life. Like you see sometimes those people had a good day or was happy to a point. Many different reasons I suppose.
Powerful poem.
Powerful poem.
24th Dec 2022 4:05am
24th Dec 2022 4:00am
Perfect.
This is so strongly written. It's solid as hell and yet not heavy.
Truly an awesome write.
Merry Christmas, Tim.
This is so strongly written. It's solid as hell and yet not heavy.
Truly an awesome write.
Merry Christmas, Tim.
24th Dec 2022 4:06am
