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Follow the stream
The River’s Blessed Path
I ask myself of the need
To follow such a fine form
Who dismisses
Whose kind kisses
Could confirm freedom to bleed
The cold curse and wicked storm
From the bowed
From the owed
Aims that permit a poor thought
To now condemn knowledge found
By trained souls
By but whole
Who had not allowed the taught
To share care, should it have sound
In our hearts
In our parts. (16)
I fail to find the tamed tool
That lets me lose what wounded sense
I took there
I so spared
To allow this face of fools
To chase a choice made too tense
You made clear
You must hear
As often as bells do ring
To come forward to train
Confessed ways
Confused days
The plain rules that always sing
To connect life to what sane
Aches I feel
Ache to heal (32)
I pray this hope puts a smile
On your blessed mouth where words
Let life back
Let life track
Such a rugged route all the while
I had wanted to have it now heard
How it lucked
How it struck
My mind to make me the most
Relieved in thought when I cry
Of time lost
Of time’s cost
Of the faults I boor to host
The scarred mental state that I
Had to dare
Had to wear (48)
RVM (8/15/10)
I ask myself of the need
To follow such a fine form
Who dismisses
Whose kind kisses
Could confirm freedom to bleed
The cold curse and wicked storm
From the bowed
From the owed
Aims that permit a poor thought
To now condemn knowledge found
By trained souls
By but whole
Who had not allowed the taught
To share care, should it have sound
In our hearts
In our parts. (16)
I fail to find the tamed tool
That lets me lose what wounded sense
I took there
I so spared
To allow this face of fools
To chase a choice made too tense
You made clear
You must hear
As often as bells do ring
To come forward to train
Confessed ways
Confused days
The plain rules that always sing
To connect life to what sane
Aches I feel
Ache to heal (32)
I pray this hope puts a smile
On your blessed mouth where words
Let life back
Let life track
Such a rugged route all the while
I had wanted to have it now heard
How it lucked
How it struck
My mind to make me the most
Relieved in thought when I cry
Of time lost
Of time’s cost
Of the faults I boor to host
The scarred mental state that I
Had to dare
Had to wear (48)
RVM (8/15/10)
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