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This poem is called It Was A Great City
with Great People
Yes...with Tall Great Buildings....
that reached High...to the Sky.....
..........
....and
....the Light....that shown
....from this city......
was Great.....
......and could be seen....
. ....for miles and miles away....
......
.....
But then...one dark night...
.....for some reason.....
....
All went Dark....!!!!!!!!!.....
....
Yes....all the Light....that was shining....
in this Great City......
was suddenly Black.....!!!!!!!!!
....
and....the Great People of the Great City...
.....were suddenly.....not so great......
.....but were now.... in a Great Panic....
......
And as they ran into the streets...
...........
.....they cried out......
.....with Great Fear....for Help.....
...
........
....
Maybe you feel like these people....
....
for....
whatever made your life Great...
is now.... suddenly gone....!!!!!!!
.....
.....and....as your tears fall...
you feel fear....
as you stand alone....
.....
..
...
But you are not alone ...!!!!!!!!!.....
....
....
No....
....
you are not....
for....
The Lord Jesus is with you..... :) :) :)
.......
.......Yes.......
Jesus.....
stands....with you.....
........
and His Light.....
So Bright....
will warm you...........
and.....
hold you tight......
......
For His Light is really.....Love...!!!!!!!!
Great Love...
......
Yes....
His Love for you.....is....
.....
.....The Greatest Love ........
............. :)
Yes...with Tall Great Buildings....
that reached High...to the Sky.....
..........
....and
....the Light....that shown
....from this city......
was Great.....
......and could be seen....
. ....for miles and miles away....
......
.....
But then...one dark night...
.....for some reason.....
....
All went Dark....!!!!!!!!!.....
....
Yes....all the Light....that was shining....
in this Great City......
was suddenly Black.....!!!!!!!!!
....
and....the Great People of the Great City...
.....were suddenly.....not so great......
.....but were now.... in a Great Panic....
......
And as they ran into the streets...
...........
.....they cried out......
.....with Great Fear....for Help.....
...
........
....
Maybe you feel like these people....
....
for....
whatever made your life Great...
is now.... suddenly gone....!!!!!!!
.....
.....and....as your tears fall...
you feel fear....
as you stand alone....
.....
..
...
But you are not alone ...!!!!!!!!!.....
....
....
No....
....
you are not....
for....
The Lord Jesus is with you..... :) :) :)
.......
.......Yes.......
Jesus.....
stands....with you.....
........
and His Light.....
So Bright....
will warm you...........
and.....
hold you tight......
......
For His Light is really.....Love...!!!!!!!!
Great Love...
......
Yes....
His Love for you.....is....
.....
.....The Greatest Love ........
............. :)
Published 16th Dec 2022
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23rd Mar 2024 5:33pm
This poem evokes a powerful sense of contrast between the greatness of a city and its sudden descent into darkness and panic. It effectively captures the universal human experience of loss and fear, where something once cherished is unexpectedly taken away.
The shift from the city's greatness to its darkness mirrors the highs and lows of life itself, reminding us of the fragility of our achievements and the unpredictability of our circumstances. The imagery of light and darkness is a timeless metaphor for hope and despair, adding depth to the emotional journey depicted in the poem.
The poem's message about finding solace in faith, specifically in the presence of Jesus, offers comfort and reassurance to those facing adversity. It speaks to the enduring belief in divine love as a guiding light during times of darkness and uncertainty.
Overall, the poem's structure, imagery, and message work together to convey a profound sense of resilience and hope in the face of adversity, making it both poignant and uplifting.
22nd Dec 2024 5:10pm
