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My Muses.
My Mistress muse, my most mild making muse
moderates my mouth mightily,
muzzles my mouth, my monstrous mouth,
ministers my many moods, mothers me...
My Master muse, mostly misogynist muse,
makes me mutter, misanthrope, me!
makes me militarise most mankind's missuse
mouthing " Mort! Mort! Mort! Murderer...
My messengers? Megabomb, Megatron
Minutemen, metamorphosises men, makes
minus, mongrel men, mostly miserable men...
Hmmm, Armageddon?
moderates my mouth mightily,
muzzles my mouth, my monstrous mouth,
ministers my many moods, mothers me...
My Master muse, mostly misogynist muse,
makes me mutter, misanthrope, me!
makes me militarise most mankind's missuse
mouthing " Mort! Mort! Mort! Murderer...
My messengers? Megabomb, Megatron
Minutemen, metamorphosises men, makes
minus, mongrel men, mostly miserable men...
Hmmm, Armageddon?
Published 16th Dec 2022
| Edited 18th Mar 2023
Author's Note
G ap
Minutemen. I. C. B. M.
I made megabomb up
but I bet, I bet there's
one out there.
Minutemen. I. C. B. M.
I made megabomb up
but I bet, I bet there's
one out there.
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17th Dec 2022 8:35pm
Is this your dating profile, lol? Yes, I am being a little misogynistic whilst trying to have a laugh at the same time. I must say, I like the way you have written & arranged this piece even if I do not like some of its content.
" dating profile"
very clever. I could've arranged it a bit better but, by-the-by i became a bit bored and thought bollo...
cheers Billy, thanks for stopping by
very clever. I could've arranged it a bit better but, by-the-by i became a bit bored and thought bollo...
cheers Billy, thanks for stopping by
21st Dec 2022 4:03am
I certainly do enjoy seeing your talents here. I love how you sneak us history and such within your writes. Wonderful words, consistently.
21st Dec 2022 8:19am
Well, thank you kindly for that lovely comment, music to my ears.
Regards from Rew.
Regards from Rew.
21st Dec 2022 4:04am
21st Dec 2022 8:27am
Now you've mentioned " masterful " it's put it into my mind that I could've done the second half a bit bdms.ish and thereby putting all the blame onto the protagonist's " master muse " & got a few more
' m ' in while I was at it.
I might try one like that " my master muse masterfully masters me " lol.
Cheers.
' m ' in while I was at it.
I might try one like that " my master muse masterfully masters me " lol.
Cheers.
22nd Dec 2022 2:05am
