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Ash
The flower’s petals softly blow away as the weight of my grief is lifted
I'm dug out of the shallow grave I've buried myself in
I don’t have to breathe in the ash of my own burnt spirit when I'm around you
My eyes light up by the sun I'm able to see myself in the mirror and I see you right next to me
I'm dug out of the shallow grave I've buried myself in
I don’t have to breathe in the ash of my own burnt spirit when I'm around you
My eyes light up by the sun I'm able to see myself in the mirror and I see you right next to me
Published 4th Dec 2022
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6th Jan 2023 3:35pm
This is a beautifully written poem, Callisto. The gratitude and love the narrator has for their significant other is evident, and very heartfelt.
9th Jan 2023 7:58pm
