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(un)done
A melody meanders
unchained about my mind
a movement uncloaked
awaiting to unwind
I'm (un)done
a mess amid the musings
misguided it might well seem
its forces drawing me in
a trance I follow and become
write for me (it calls)
create
a soliloquy of love
a song for all to see
painted in a mid-day dream
where romance lives and breathes
where yesterdays meet tomorrow
and today is forever free
a nature's breeze
meandering
within the tree
swaying aside your hips
arising to kiss your lips
oh of what shall be
is it of wandered day
mouthings of word that are right
desperately written in the battle of night
picture pure imperfections
enriched in a beauty
emulating from an adorning
hidden deep within her eye
unchained about my mind
a movement uncloaked
awaiting to unwind
I'm (un)done
a mess amid the musings
misguided it might well seem
its forces drawing me in
a trance I follow and become
write for me (it calls)
create
a soliloquy of love
a song for all to see
painted in a mid-day dream
where romance lives and breathes
where yesterdays meet tomorrow
and today is forever free
a nature's breeze
meandering
within the tree
swaying aside your hips
arising to kiss your lips
oh of what shall be
is it of wandered day
mouthings of word that are right
desperately written in the battle of night
picture pure imperfections
enriched in a beauty
emulating from an adorning
hidden deep within her eye
Published 2nd Dec 2022
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2nd Dec 2022 4:16am
Hey Tim:)
This is really exquisite. Almost magical in a way.
It flowed effortlessly and I enjoyed format. All the little breaks
in the stanzas. Something I'm always leery of doing. Don't ask why!! hahah
This is really exquisite. Almost magical in a way.
It flowed effortlessly and I enjoyed format. All the little breaks
in the stanzas. Something I'm always leery of doing. Don't ask why!! hahah
2nd Dec 2022 4:21am
Where the wind takes me...I think.sometimes there needs to be a pause.or a change of direction...don't know.why or when I started to write this way,..just evolving I guess...thanks A ;)
10th Dec 2022 4:55am
10th Dec 2022 5:41am
