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Muse
Moonshine words mooning over zephyr
because zephyr is swooning over crescent
Fairy flys in zephyrs muse
And he caught her in his ruse
because zephyr is swooning over crescent
Fairy flys in zephyrs muse
And he caught her in his ruse
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Re. Muse
In such Moonlight swoon, Zephyr is the one caught, in such trap laid from thousands miles away by Fairy Hands.bravo !!! successful intro !!
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Re: Re. Muse
30th Nov 2022 7:42pm
Ehh , fairy is caught in zephyrs trap and trying to resist coz dragon still tied to her.
Re. Muse
1st Dec 2022 12:21pm
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
And what a breezy entrance! Welcome!
Next one please?
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
And what a breezy entrance! Welcome!
Next one please?
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Muse
1st Dec 2022 1:37pm
Re. Muse
1st Dec 2022 7:09pm
Sometimes, what we think will be pleasant does not turn out so.
Welcome to DUP.
Welcome to DUP.
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Re: Re. Muse
1st Dec 2022 7:21pm
Yeah crushes and infatuation deactivate our minds but thinking with the heart just causes pain, regrets and ruin, you are so right. I should heed your warning, thanks so much for comment.
Re. Muse
7th Dec 2022 6:09am
This soars into poetic realms profound and passionate. Your gift shines here. I can't wait to read more of your verse. You have the gift of words that flies into the moonlit heavens.
John
John
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Re. Muse
7th Dec 2022 8:25am
Thanks ever so much poet for the kind appreciation, i have read yours too and yours is even more eloquent and awesome though.
Re. Muse
9th Dec 2022 8:27am
It's a beautiful poem. I can't wait to read more from you!
Added to reading list.
:)
Added to reading list.
:)
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9th Dec 2022 11:25am
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9th Dec 2022 5:44pm
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10th Dec 2022 5:55pm
Re. Muse
13th Dec 2022 2:28pm
You have beautiful ways to express your heart beyond imagination. I love your poem. Keep up the spirit. Dear...
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
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13th Dec 2022 4:22pm
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14th Dec 2022 3:40pm
Re. Muse
19th Dec 2022 8:36pm
Nice rhyming, Lunaah but I wouldn't recommend 'moonshine' lol. I believe it has a very high alcoholic content & is illegal, I think. 🤣
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Re: Re. Muse
Hey hi Billy, nooh i didn't mean beer, i didn't even know there's beer called moonshine,. I meant moonshine as in moonlight only.😁
And nice to know alcohol id illegal in your place!
And nice to know alcohol id illegal in your place!
Re: Re. Muse
19th Dec 2022 8:59pm
Alcohol is not illegal in 'my place' as you call it. Only counterfeit or unlicenced alcoholic production is illegal here as the purification process can be somewhat lacking. I mean, who wants antifreeze or rust particles in their drink, right? 🤣
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Re. Muse
19th Dec 2022 9:00pm
'Moonshine' is actually a spirit, not a beer. I have never tried it either. It gives you brain damage, apparently! I know you wouldn't have heard of moonshine & knew you meant it in the natural sense. You have an innocence about you & I respect that. I even like it. 😊
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