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Hedonism

I’m all about control

I want absolute submission even in your subconscious

I want you to freely accept my suggestions and conversations

I will dedicate myself to your pleasure purely for your loyalty

So I will never be selfish sexually or otherwise because I’m about your entire being

I believe in sexual communication, I want you to guide me to your secrets

So that I can tap into your limitations and test their validity

I want to focus on your breath, touch, sounds, rhythm, and senses

I wouldn’t do anything without your permissions; but then again you’re a willing participant

My sole purpose is your pleasure never mine

Your needs assisted by me, defined by me

Always focused on you so that whatever feelings you get aren’t because of me but it’s intimacy of us

That’s something shared equally between partners

Both should be open to each other and fully trusting without reserve or fear

That’s your perception of your past

I’ve never thought of myself because if you’re satisfied then I benefit with your time, love and life

If I’m abusive you might participate for a while but it isn’t pleasurable

Any man whose selfish in their relationship never fully prosper

Only thing shared between us is time, everything else is devotion to the woman
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