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My times about up
Why can't things just go away?
I live through sorrow each day
Give me a reason why I should stay
I can never find the right words to say
Day by day I live in pain
And I'm the only one to blame
Everything just stays the same
I'm tired of playing this game
Nobody even cares
Why is there so much darkness in the air?
I don't know how much more I can bare
This is a neverending nightmare
Well im afraid this is just my luck
It's like a knife in my chest that got stuck
This really does suck
I guess my times just about up
I live through sorrow each day
Give me a reason why I should stay
I can never find the right words to say
Day by day I live in pain
And I'm the only one to blame
Everything just stays the same
I'm tired of playing this game
Nobody even cares
Why is there so much darkness in the air?
I don't know how much more I can bare
This is a neverending nightmare
Well im afraid this is just my luck
It's like a knife in my chest that got stuck
This really does suck
I guess my times just about up
Published 29th Mar 2012
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29th Mar 2012 11:00pm
I think a part of being human is having at least one experience where is seems like the world world is against you. I can say have had a few, especially being diagnosed as bi-polar. I found my salvation typically in music. (A little bit playing an instrument but typically in song lyrics)
Thanks for sharing with us.
Thanks for sharing with us.
30th Mar 2012 11:20pm
i would love to see you do a free verse though. i feel like you are trapping yourself with the rhyme scheme
