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Penetration
Penetration
Deep penetration of oceanic eyes
Like aloe moisturizer for the soul
Whose gaze is a persistent vision
That sees the hyper gamma spaces
Where mind waves seek her heat
Like a burning Joshua Tree
Flaming tresses ripple
Her Caribbean blue blouse
Touches the sky with runes
Deep penetration of oceanic eyes
Like aloe moisturizer for the soul
Whose gaze is a persistent vision
That sees the hyper gamma spaces
Where mind waves seek her heat
Like a burning Joshua Tree
Flaming tresses ripple
Her Caribbean blue blouse
Touches the sky with runes
Published 13th Oct 2022
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14th Oct 2022 00:52am
Seriously impactful for such a tiny little poem!!.. lol... I adored each powerhouse of a line and the way it was able to stir me in all the wonderful places, I LOVE being stirred ;p
You always impress, my dear poet!!
🌹 💙
-Susan
You always impress, my dear poet!!
🌹 💙
-Susan
I am thrilled that this stirred you in all the right places, my love. This poem was inspired by a woman muse friend whose self-photos always stir me. Very glad my impression stirred you just where it did. Your RL gave me a good stirring just in the right place too my darling.
Love to you my darling sweetness,
John
Love to you my darling sweetness,
John
