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I Am Silk and Lace
His calloused hands
and muscled core are
like leather piercing
earth and sky,
always to take new lands.
I am silk and lace and
soft floral smells over
grassy wetlands.
I give the hug of a child
remembering her father.
My hands hold tight
to strong shoulders
smooth and young.
My palms are warm against skin.
My fingertips are
desperate to hold.
My hips lead my most
treasured parts toward earth
with hints of a coming dance.
I become light and wet,
hidden in his embrace.
and muscled core are
like leather piercing
earth and sky,
always to take new lands.
I am silk and lace and
soft floral smells over
grassy wetlands.
I give the hug of a child
remembering her father.
My hands hold tight
to strong shoulders
smooth and young.
My palms are warm against skin.
My fingertips are
desperate to hold.
My hips lead my most
treasured parts toward earth
with hints of a coming dance.
I become light and wet,
hidden in his embrace.
Published 12th Oct 2022
Author's Note
This is a description of how I felt with a recent lover.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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12th Oct 2022 2:07pm
You have mastered writing a poem, you carried me with you in those moments, your wild desire, your words fly in my mind and I imagine the details of the moments
Thank you for your fine feminine writing
Thank you for your fine feminine writing
12th Oct 2022 2:10pm
Thank you for giving such sweet comments this kind morning. I'll soar for a few hours with your words ringing in my mind.
12th Oct 2022 2:15pm
I said what I felt when I read your poem.
Thank you for making me travel in the sea of desire with your words and explore the feeling of ecstasy in its letters
Thank you for making me travel in the sea of desire with your words and explore the feeling of ecstasy in its letters
12th Oct 2022 7:46pm
With its mix of metaphors of the body and landscape I sense an air of the Song of Solomon, for example in these verses:
His calloused hands
and muscled core are
like leather piercing
earth and sky,
always to take new lands.
I am silk and lace and
soft floral smells over
grassy wetlands.
My hips lead my most
treasured parts toward earth
with hints of a coming dance.
I become light and wet,
hidden in his embrace.
His calloused hands
and muscled core are
like leather piercing
earth and sky,
always to take new lands.
I am silk and lace and
soft floral smells over
grassy wetlands.
My hips lead my most
treasured parts toward earth
with hints of a coming dance.
I become light and wet,
hidden in his embrace.
13th Oct 2022 1:15am
14th Oct 2022 4:46am
First stanza made me think of Aragon from Lord of The Rings or even a Knight from the Round Table. The rest drew me to the sound of a symphony played as a couple does the dance of romance.
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